Just Breathe

April 29, 2007 · 4 comments

in the gloaming
the sun slipped through the trees
raising thin fingers of crimson
in a silent farewell
behind me, the moon began
its subtle glow and the crickets
started their harmonic dance
i paused and took a full deep breath
and spring filled my lungs
the scents of nature coming back to life
after a long and frigid and smothering winter
the air smelled like spring
a soft caress of warmth and hope
and freedom
suddenly, i was able to breathe again

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<![CDATA[Shine]]& April 30, 2007 at 2:05 pm

Simply lovely. 🙂

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<![CDATA[flutterc April 30, 2007 at 4:31 pm

well good-NESS! Look at YOU getting all poetical. (that\'s a flava flav-arism.)

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April 30, 2007 at 9:05 pm

Simply lovely. 🙂

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April 30, 2007 at 11:31 pm

well good-NESS! Look at YOU getting all poetical. (that’s a flava flav-arism.)

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